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Post by Kama-sama on Aug 19, 2007 14:17:46 GMT -5
REJCETD
A. Your spellingness was badly
B. Your grammar needs to be more better
C. Your histery waz prety bad to
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Post by Prison Bait on Aug 19, 2007 17:23:01 GMT -5
modified my character
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Post by Prison Bait on Aug 19, 2007 19:43:27 GMT -5
Name: Sally
Nickname: (If any)
Occupation: Student
Species: Shinigami
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 250
Eyes: dark crimson, left eye blind
Hair: Medium length, normal messy
Age: 300
Apparent Age: 28
Appearance: tan skinned cut on left eye
Attire:student komono
Weapons: Zanpakuto
Personal Belongings: Picture of his family
Personality: Most of the time hes happy but serious at times
Abilities: skilled at shooting and fire kidou
Zanpakuto:Katana with a trigger as the hand guard
Shikai: Its a gun that gives deadly aim and boost of speed
Bankai:Its a gun-blade it gets powerful bullets it gives a big thing of speed
Strengths: shooting swords man ship
Weakness: left side
Family: sister
Marital Status: single
Legal Status: peasant
Living Status: shinigami acadamy
Most Commonly Used Saying: none
History: Him and his sister were prodigies. He normally worked on becoming a shinigami.He trained for weeks without speaking to anyone.
One day he was training and a hollow had attacked him. He felt that soon he would die. he then joined the shinigami acadamy.
Then he was on a mission their family has killed by a soul in rags with a sword. Then after that he promised to find and kill the killer who always spoke replacing the word I with We or Us. He fought with this anger for years and finally cooled down when he was 200.
Extra Info: n/a
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Post by Sgt.Lima on Aug 19, 2007 19:51:26 GMT -5
REJECTED Make it Bulkyer
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